Zihuatanejo-Ixtapa Message Board - Research on Ayotzinapa

Research on Ayotzinapa (reply)

dhunsber — Mon, 19 Dec 2016 23:50:59 +0000

I'm convinced that if you do well,
you'll soon be doing good, too.

Kindest regards

Research on Ayotzinapa (reply)

JohvdelaCruz — Mon, 19 Dec 2016 01:17:42 +0000

http://jmwriters.blogspot.mx/2016/12/student-writing-research-on-ayotzinapa.html

Hello people. This is Jovani. As you may know, I study English and this is a paper where I talk about the students that were kidnapped in Iguala. I didn't have enough time to correct it so you'll find some errors. This is my overview only.

Please, feel free to leave a comment. Hope you'll like it!

Thank you very much you all! Some people say that I can be a good journalist. Unfortunately I don't feel that I can help develop my society the way I want to by writing news and researches! I study Tourism Management and Development. Hopefully I'll pursue a Masters degree at the University of Texas at El Paso. You perhaps remember that I wanted to study abroad and I'm glad to tell you that I took an intensive English course for a month there. I came back a week ago and this experience helped me realize that I can do whatever I want. I'm very capable of that! Don't get me wrong, I don't mean to be a show off. I just want to make friend with people like you, foreigners, with a different culture and life perspective. Thanks for reading

Research on Ayotzinapa (reply)

Elena S — Sat, 17 Dec 2016 17:00:32 +0000

Thank you for sharing your research in English. I thought I knew the story of what happened there, but I learned a lot of new information from your report. Such a travesty.
I see one of your sources is The New York Times. Regular reading of it will improve the English of just about anyone, native English speakers as well as adult learners of English.
Bien suerte

Research on Ayotzinapa (reply)

dhunsber — Sat, 17 Dec 2016 15:23:01 +0000

Well done, Jovani!
You're well on your way to being completely fluent in English.
Your account of the story of the 43 from Iguala is powerful and moving.

Research on Ayotzinapa (reply)

ZihuaRob — Sat, 17 Dec 2016 14:38:12 +0000

http://jmwriters.blogspot.mx/2016/12/student-writing-research-on-ayotzinapa.html

Hello people. This is Jovani. As you may know, I study English and this is a paper where I talk about the students that were kidnapped in Iguala. I didn't have enough time to correct it so you'll find some errors. This is my overview only.

Please, feel free to leave a comment. Hope you'll like it!

A powerful story, Jovani. You cover the most important aspects in sufficient detail without being judgemental, and you paint a complete and balanced explanation of the events. Not an easy thing to do for any of us who live in Guerrero and who are familiar with the history of the normalistas, the criminal gangs, the corrupt authorities, and the Guerra Sucia.

There are some minor errors of grammar and translation, but they don't affect the comprehension but rather only give you more legitimacy and authenticity. It takes many years to dominate a language 100%. And you are easily over 95% there. Congratulations on your perseverance.

Thank you for sharing this important part of Guerrero's contemporary history. You tell our story as only a guerrerense can do.

¡Viva Guerrero! ¡Faltan 43!

Research on Ayotzinapa

JohvdelaCruz — Sat, 17 Dec 2016 05:19:08 +0000

http://jmwriters.blogspot.mx/2016/12/student-writing-research-on-ayotzinapa.html

Hello people. This is Jovani. As you may know, I study English and this is a paper where I talk about the students that were kidnapped in Iguala. I didn't have enough time to correct it so you'll find some errors. This is my overview only.

Please, feel free to leave a comment. Hope you'll like it!