Research on Ayotzinapa

http://jmwriters.blogspot.mx/2016/12/student-writing-research-on-ayotzinapa.html

Hello people. This is Jovani. As you may know, I study English and this is a paper where I talk about the students that were kidnapped in Iguala. I didn't have enough time to correct it so you'll find some errors. This is my overview only.

Please, feel free to leave a comment. Hope you'll like it!

A powerful story, Jovani. You cover the most important aspects in sufficient detail without being judgemental, and you paint a complete and balanced explanation of the events. Not an easy thing to do for any of us who live in Guerrero and who are familiar with the history of the normalistas, the criminal gangs, the corrupt authorities, and the Guerra Sucia.

There are some minor errors of grammar and translation, but they don't affect the comprehension but rather only give you more legitimacy and authenticity. It takes many years to dominate a language 100%. And you are easily over 95% there. Congratulations on your perseverance.

Thank you for sharing this important part of Guerrero's contemporary history. You tell our story as only a guerrerense can do.

¡Viva Guerrero! ¡Faltan 43!